tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6320269312957801390.post7445547469251213957..comments2024-03-29T02:03:59.053-07:00Comments on TalkToYoUniverse: Wednesday Worldbuilding Workshop: Description implies narrator focusJuliette Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02879627074920760712noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6320269312957801390.post-74607263208358170262011-02-27T11:22:43.336-08:002011-02-27T11:22:43.336-08:00Domini, thanks for getting back! I appreciate how ...Domini, thanks for getting back! I appreciate how thorough you are in following up. I'll go see what you've done.Juliette Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02879627074920760712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6320269312957801390.post-33273447741672931542011-02-27T00:43:02.862-08:002011-02-27T00:43:02.862-08:00I am vastly late in getting it up, but I finally s...I am vastly late in getting it up, but I finally sat down and put my thoughts together at my blog, which should be linked to my name here.<br /><br />Once again, thanks so much for your insights!Dominihttp://dmdomini.livejournal.com/157630.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6320269312957801390.post-16495307955207891642011-02-17T13:58:17.038-08:002011-02-17T13:58:17.038-08:00Domini, you're welcome. Thanks again for submi...Domini, you're welcome. Thanks again for submitting! I may stop by to see what you have to say about this on your blog.Juliette Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02879627074920760712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6320269312957801390.post-21486561235594958602011-02-17T12:11:50.922-08:002011-02-17T12:11:50.922-08:00Thank you for your thoughts on my submission! You...Thank you for your thoughts on my submission! You spotted two errors I'm definitely going to fix, and gave me food to think about with the onomatopoeia and the narration. Very, very, very helpful.<br /><br />I'm actually going to write a large post in my own blog, but I did want to let you know this detailed dig-in of my first 500ish words has been awesome. Thank you so much. :)Dominihttp://dmdomini.livejournal.comnoreply@blogger.com